a kiss in the wind
from you to my waiting lips
serenade of love
a kiss in the wind
from you to my waiting lips
serenade of love
while you are so far away
I listen to the emotional music
Haiku or Tanka – which one is best?
Carpe Diem: #1084 Serenade (Schubert).
I have come to like cello more and more. And I love when artists play their instruments with a lot of tenderness and feelings. As it always should be in the act of love.
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Great page – like the explanations. Usually am a fan of tanka but when the haiku is really good I like that.
The haiku worked best here I think.
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Thanks a lot for your opinion and kind words Forest Bather!
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I like very much your sensibility ! Very successful haiku and tanka ! I like both of them !
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Thank you very much Virginia! I think I am in a kind of flow period – it feels like that 🙂
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‘A kiss in the wind’ how beautiful
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Thanks Candy! It’s nice to get 😉
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Luv the lightness of the romance in your tanka. The wind is a lovely messenger.
Thanks for dropping by to read mine
Much love…
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I really like the haiku, Birgitta!
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Thanks Kim!
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Sweet haiku! Tanka explains a bit more but not necessary to get the vibe 🙂
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Thanks Lynn for kind words and for your opinion!
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My pleasure…the cello/piano duet is wonderful (sigh)
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Your haiku is really beautiful !
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Thank you so much!
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I like the air of mystery in the haiku.
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I’m so glad you do and that you found it mystery cause I wanted it to be. Thanks a lot!
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Both are beauties Birgitta.
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Thanks Kristjaan!
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