A haiku
at last the end
when a year leaves behind
a filed memory
A tanka …
at last the end
when a year leaves behind
a filed memory
fluttering away in the wind
like butterflies
Carpe Diem: Universal Jane #10 New Year’s Day.
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Very inspired haiku and tanka. I particularly like the memories ”fluttering away in the wind like butterflies”
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Thanks Virginia!
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Yes tanka gives more…I will read the verses I have missed. Sorry. I enjoy your page..of course! but disappeared a bit
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a ‘filed memory’ of a year! Great concept!
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Thanks Kim!
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Splendid!
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Thank you so much Janice!!
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Nice Birgitta, I like how you have re-created your haiku into a tanka … very well done.
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Thanks Kristjaan!
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