oh this silence …
boulders filled
by cikadans squeaks ©Basho
a squirrel sneaks away
up into and around the trunkit’s getting darker
volume turned up
like million violinspulling the covers upp
to soften sound for earsafter a sigh
acorn fell on forehead
that squirrelanother acorn fell
somebody is still workingin the sky
a star fell too
my wishthe silence is safe
a dream came true
I don’t know if I have succeeded in my first ‘Soliloquy No Renga’ (a Renga written by one poet) – this monologue with ‘hokku’ and ‘ageku’.
Is it a 8-stanza renga?