poetry

The moon is humble

Carpe Diem Special #127, Sogi’s third ”dewy evening”.

Both grasses and trees
waiting for the moon
dewy evening       
© Iio Sogi (1424-1502)

HAIKU

dew glisten meadow
swaying in a last dance
the moon is humble

TROIKU

dew glisten meadow
grass and flowers sing refrain
end verse is waiting

swaying in a last dance
softly kissing the sweetheart
farewell is near

the moon is humble
a scene of nature romance
eyes closed by stars

© Birgitta Rudenius

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First Prime M

Carpe Diem’s ”Ask Jane …” #7, Tanka, the grandmother of Haiku.

I wanted to vote
for our new leadership
she is a leader

history count sexteenth head
Swedens first female Prime M

Ps. Today the Moderat party in Sweden changed leader. Now Anna Kinberg Batra is the leader (before was Fredrik Reinfeldt former Prime Minister).

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Blue moth

Carpe Diem Special #126, Sogi’s ”Butterfly home”.

abandoned house
the garden taken over –
butterfly home                 © Iio Sogi (Tr. Chèvrefeuille)

broken windows
after the bombing – spiders spinning
their cobwebs                     © Chèvrefeuille

 blue moth dance salsa
lilac swaying back and forth
a fly killed by swat

 

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Juxtaposition

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #1, Juxtaposition.

I often hear that juxtaposition is a key to successful haiku. The contrast of two images in haiku is most often instrumental in creating resonance. © Chèvrefeuille

Robert Spiess, editor of ‘Modern Haiku’, has said the following about juxtaposition in haiku:
[…] “Juxtaposition of entities in haiku cannot be simply the throwing together of just anything; the poet must have the intuition that certain things, albeit of ”opposite” characteristics, nonetheless have a resonance with each other that will evoke a revelation when they are juxtaposed in accordance with the time-tested canons and aesthetics of haiku.” […]

an old man stumbled
while all people moved in hurry
baby girl screamed loud

the running fence
great piece of creative art
Elton still standing

technique in order
juxtaposition is fun
chaos in playground

Ps. Do you know about Christo’s ”Running fence”? And Elton Johns ”Still standing”?

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Heart is sacred

Carpe Diem #642, Sacred Rope (Shimekazari).
Kigo is that little Japanese word used by haijin (haiku poets) to fix or identify  a season in their poem.  There are more than 500 seasonal words that can be used.

remove strangle
rule the rope for freedom
heart is sacred

sacred rope
like upside down horse shoe
rest confidently

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I am ready

Carpe Diem #640, First Sun (Hatsuhi) and Carpe Diem #641, Spring Kimono (Harugi).

the beam of light strikes
sun is grabbing the morning
welcome sweet life

in time for life
the spring of offsprings wake
coloring flowers

I bought my ticket
sitting in first row of show
now press the button

I am ready ….

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Swinging my life

Skrivpuff: Hålla.

Vaknade med ett HAIKU i huvudet denna dag. Sedan blev det en bild också. Håll i dig nu!

bort ur mitt liv nu
ett endaste litet klick
fri för en ny vår

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swinging my life
while hanging on to my ideals
filled with hearts

© Birgitta Rudenius