Tagging my life

tagging my life
while mother earth is colored
with zeros
I live in fluffy pink dreams
outside the world turns black

black=#000000

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Baigneur de Fôret skriver:

2016-11-24 kl. 20:02

This has different angles. In one way it reads terribly sad, and in another as sage advice. Really good for thinking. Very well done.

GillaGillad av 1 person

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1. B i r g i t t a skriver:
  
  2016-11-24 kl. 21:38
  
  Yes behind playing with the words there often is some serious or secret/hidden message 🙂
  
  GillaGilla
  
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Chèvrefeuille skriver:

2016-11-25 kl. 00:53

Wow what a beautiful tanka

GillaGillad av 1 person

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1. B i r g i t t a skriver:
  
  2016-11-25 kl. 10:32
  
  Thank you so much!
  
  GillaGillad av 1 person
  
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  1. Chèvrefeuille skriver:
    
    2016-11-25 kl. 16:24
    
    You’re welcome Birgitta
    
    GillaGillad av 1 person
    
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