in swirling clouds
singing romantic blues
I send a kiss
a waltz for happy hearts
holding each other so tight
Carpe Diem: #22 Tanka Splendor – Blues.
in swirling clouds
singing romantic blues
I send a kiss
a waltz for happy hearts
holding each other so tight
Carpe Diem: #22 Tanka Splendor – Blues.
So warm. So nice. So powerful. The scene sears, and this may be your very best poem. It will stay in my mind a long time. I see the scene, feel the emotion. The generosity of loneliness.
GillaGillad av 1 person
Wow 🙂 THANKS!
GillaGilla
a fantastic tanka – romance can be blue (apparently)
GillaGillad av 1 person
Thanks a lot!
GillaGilla