Salt in its soul

sea of loneliness
made by tear’s of sadness
salt in its soul
inherits the unhappy thoughts
struggling to set the heart free

alt. last line
to tune in the cordial blues

Carpe Diem: #22 Tanka Splendor – Blues.

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Virginia Popescu skriver:

2016-11-22 kl. 11:35

A tanka full of sadness.

GillaGillad av 1 person

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1. B i r g i t t a skriver:
  
  2016-11-22 kl. 11:41
  
  Yes and I don’t now why it’s so easy to write about sadness 😉 Thanks for visiting!
  
  GillaGilla
  
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Baigneur de Fôret skriver:

2016-11-22 kl. 17:13

Well that gushed sadness, but beautifully. The tone was very moving indeed

GillaGillad av 1 person

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1. B i r g i t t a skriver:
  
  2016-11-22 kl. 21:53
  
  Thanks a lot for your kind words!
  
  GillaGilla
  
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