Carpe Diem Ghost Writer #36, Haiku Noir
Bewitching shadows
watchful eyes view threats in night
love is a strangle.
- Kommentar
- Reblogga
-
Prenumerera
Prenumererad
Har du redan ett WordPress.com-konto? Logga in nu.
B_ live 
That last line was thought-provoking..
GillaGilla
🙂 I think it was meant to 🙂
GillaGilla
Love certainly exudes strange feelings. Strangling is often a valid threat! Nicely Birgitta!
Hank
GillaGilla
Oh, they definitely do look like they’re strangling one another. Classic Film Noir motif — well done!
GillaGilla
Thanks 🙂
GillaGilla
Love has been called many things, so it’s quite an achievement to start a line ”love is…” and provoke a shock at the end. Well done 🙂
GillaGilla
Thanks Blake!
GillaGilla
An awesome photo with a haiku written towards it as black as the image itself … lovers can be strangling eachother … it’s sometimes good to let the loved one go and do something for yourself. That makes the relation stronger … nicely written haiku noir …
GillaGilla